I sang a song and wrapped
it in feathers; dutifully delivered
it to your door, in the hope
to see you dance.
I decanted the contents in
harmony with a red bow
on my chest – left no note untouched as
lyrics fell out
all over the carpet; staining your fabric
with a glitter, in my eyes.
But mine are mine and yours saw
cement
as you looked down upon my
creation; confusing double
entendres
with tunnel vision – no longer
hearing the music that I made
as you tossed down your own words
dipped in a sticky, sarcastic blood.
Blood of us
spattered over chorus and verses
subduing melodic love to silence.
I never expected to witness such
a massacre, here
on your doorstep
and have been doing my own dance
for rain
ever since.
Wow. So sad he missed the point…
It is pretty sad…
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Beautiful song…
Thank you for sharing…
My pleasure.
Do keep up the good work.
Cheers
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Thanks Edward, you ‘re a Gent.
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Welcome aboard! And thanks for the reference…
Your imagery is really good, meaningful and deep. I like the end especially bringing in the rain dance. The feathers in the beginning also tie into the theme. Thanks for your gift to us readers!
Oh, you’re very welcome. And very kind. Thank you for telling me you enjoyed the read…it really does mean a lot.
Hmmm…pain and joy twists together. Nice work.
Thanks…and thanks for reading and taking the time to tell me, so.
Hi again….You know I read all of your posts…..but this one is really good. The imagery is magnificent. The words laced first with love then vile deceit. Metaphors filled with optimism then despair. Two disparate visions of the same thing. It reminds us that we see what we want to see.
I love your work….
H.
Thank you Howard, most appreciated.
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